You'll forgive me if I say that I like this song a lot. Writing it was a very fun experiment in note relationships, atonality, and combining both major and minor harmonies. The only thing I don't like are the speed metal riffs I tacked onto the end. The first of those riffs is very generic, and the second is a ripoff of a riff from "Sinner" by Judas Priest.
I have both a midi and an enhanced version of this song, but I'm not even going to bother posting the midi, because the enhanced version is better.
Edit: This is in the wrong file type to be able to be played online, so I'll change it soon.